Phoenix is Over the Rainbow

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Phoenix is Over the Rainbow

Postby skyland » Mon Jul 21, 2014 10:16 am

Ext. Office - Day

Snow melts from the eaves of a brown stone office building.

The Boss yells (offscreen)

Get in here!

Int. Receptionist Area -Day

Computer Screen

A secretary shops online.
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Re: Phoenix is Over the Rainbow

Postby Elaine Glimme » Mon Aug 04, 2014 4:26 pm

Hi, Skyland,

Thanks for sharing. The picture you painted was so real. I've worked in that office.
I hope we get more.
Elaine Glimme - author - "Temporary Address" and "The Molly Chronicles"
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Re: Phoenix is Over the Rainbow

Postby skyland » Tue Aug 05, 2014 4:23 am

Thanks Elaine. Here's a little more of the scene.

Back to scene:

Meg: I'll be right there.

INT. OFFICE - DAY

Over the Boss' desk is a sign - TO FISH OR NOT TO FISH. THAT IS THE QUESTION. Meg stands in the doorway.

Boss: This is not the letter I dictated.

Meg: I'm sure it's what you dictated. I listened to the tape twice.

Boss: You typed disconnected. It's supposed to say discontinued.

Meg takes the letter, stares at it disconcertedly and turns slowly to leave.

COMPUTER SCREEN

The Boss checks airfares on Priceline.com.
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Re: Phoenix is Over the Rainbow

Postby skyland » Wed Aug 20, 2014 11:59 pm

INT. RECEPTIONIST AREA - DAY

Meg is back at her desk. Meg types TRIP TO PHOENIX. As she types much to her surprise the computer screen changes to a motion picture screen. The movie starts rolling - SHAKESPEARE IN LOVE.
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Re: Phoenix is Over the Rainbow

Postby skyland » Sat Aug 23, 2014 5:17 pm

Joseph Fiennes: What man art thou that thus bescreen'd in night so stumblest on my counsel?

Meg squints. And then, just as oddly the computer screen switches to a commercial for an automatic Lysol mop. Meg stares and slowly starts to faint.

MEG'S DREAM

Meg is atop a mountain holding a Lysol mop like a staff. She looks at the mop in confusion. Suddenly, Swoosh. She is sliding down the mountain. She lands at the bottom of the hill on a dusty trail. Everything is blurry. She looks up to a blue, blue sky. Above her stands a man. It is JOSEPH FIENNES dressed in a black leather motorcycle jacket.
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